Monday, December 9, 2013

scholarship essay rough draft

Scholarship essay

                Many people do not know what they are going to do or where they are going to go in the future, but I know exactly how I would like to spend my future. As a long term goal I will study to become an Emergency Department Nurse. I see myself here because I enjoy medicine and saving people’s lives. To achieve this ultimate goal I will start small as a senior I am working towards getting my EMT Basic certification which I can then use to work at the local ambulance company, REMSA, or work as a patient transporter in RENOWN. After I begin working I am planning on going to the University of Nevada Reno, UNR. This is where I will further my education to becoming a Registered Nurse. The Nursing program at UNR is very well built for my goals. After working at either of these jobs I will try to network with the higher up people in these jobs which will better my career as I get further down that path. As a minor in College I will choose education. This is because if I ever lose my job I need a backup plan I have always found teachers to be fun and loving towards their students so I think that would be a very nice way to spend my time as well.

Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Frankenstein

Frankenstein by Mary Shelly is the book we are now reading in English class. This book thus far is pretty good. My favorite part is sun Victor, the stranger is on the ice cap all by himself and the people on the ship are yelling at him to come aboard so that he does not die in the attic on an ice cap. This part of the book bus far is my favorite because of how Shelly portrays everything that is going on with just a couple of letters. I know that the book is in the epistolary format which is writing with a set of letters news articles and journals. Since this is my first time ever reading an epistolary I find it very interesting to think in a new way to read this book. I also liked this part because I found it funny that there would be some guy on an ice cap floating around near the North Pole just chilling and as calm as can be. This part also set up the first chapter of the book because it is a flash back of Victor's early days, and that is what I think of Frankenstein thus far.

Monday, November 25, 2013

November blues

The November blues are not the best things in the world, but most people get them. I have not yet gotten a mental break down or any real down for that matter, but I have had my own sort of November blues that really have been bad for me. I have bee extremely forgetful which has been very bad for what I have left undone. I have forgotten many things throughout November which has been mostly homework or things that need to been done for school such as these blogs. I have been caught up all until the begining of November which I had forgotten to write a lot of. When I had looked the other day I had thought I had only needed three more blogs to be done the. I looked and I actually only had four of the ten that are supposed to be done. Then there was the incident with the yawning during my reciting of the Shakespearean soliloquy from hamlet. I am just glad that that is over and most likely not honing to happen again. I don't even know why I had yawned. I just wish that December is going to be better than November was.

Epistolary

The whole idea of an epistolary piece of writing is kind of cool. Having many letters or news articles or journal entries making up a novel or story. This had all came up because we have been discussing Frankenstein in my AP English literature class this had also been the type of book we at about to read as a class. This book is going to be Frankenstein by Mary Shelly. My friend thinks after reading a thousand leagues under the sea he knows what all epistolary ex are going to be like. In my head this is wrong because not all books that are written similar give off the same vibe as the book before it. With this I think that this book is going to be an amazing read. I have heard a lot of good things about this book and how the author, Mary Shelly, uses these letters in a great way. Although my sister's friend has ruined the whole book for me I think that I will enjoy it because it is a new way of writing that I haven't encountered thus far in my reading career. I also think that even though my friend said he wouldn't like this book he will turn around and like it by the end.

The year

Throughout the year of school many different things have happened so far and many different people have changed. This change has been both good and bad in some ways. Some of these people are better for the ways they changed thought some are words than what they started or they are just worse. I think that this might have at first been their own decision to change and become different then it transformed into someone else had been changing them to act a certain way or to thing another way. These people are the worst in my mind because the transform to the people around them. As an example someone might be hanging out with a set of friends for a while then all of a sudden they start acting like them, but then some freak accident happens and these people are no longer friends, and after a week they have changed again. These types of people just jump around from group to group or person to person changing. When should all this change end and when should some one finally stop changing just to become themselves. When some one does get out of this I think they become better for it. They set a better example and they chose the right decision to finally get their own person rather than being a sheep being led to slaughter.

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

The trip

I had been gone most of last week in a city named Elko. I know what some people are thinking, “what the heck is Elko,” I agree with that statement I had no clue where or how many people were in Elko. After we had left I realized that Elko is the place to be if you need to pre-order or buy things on black Friday this is because there are so little people in the city of Elko that everything is still there or not off of sale. One of the chaperons that went on the trip had gotten a PS 4 and was one of the first ones in line, and she didn't even place a pre-order or anything. Back to the trip though, I had a lot of fun on the Skills trip I hung out with some pretty cool people and I also danced a bunch. One of the songs that I danced to was a song named Gas Pedal and when the chorus of the song came on I went to the wall and twerked upside down on the wall. It was really fun and the teachers just shook their heads and laughed at that.

Soliloquy Fright

Having to recite a soliloquy was pretty difficult for me, although I do not have a hard time memorizing the lines itself I just got flustered up in the front of the class. The minute right before I had gotten up and took the walk up to the front I had recited my soliloquy perfectly. Then when I got to the front of the class I looked out and started I felt weird. I mean I have acted a lot previous to this and I usually do not get stage fright. After I blurted out the first three lines the rest just escaped me. I stood so still as if Medusa had frozen me and said “shot its gone all gone.” I called for my first line and kept trucking along missing half lines there and botching words here. It was a train wreck. To top it all of I gave out a giant yawn right in the middle of my speech the crowd started laughing and I went back to my seat in shame. I have no clue what went wrong, though I think it was the pressure of getting graded that had gotten to me and I had just fallen short.

Thursday, November 7, 2013

The end has come

           I know recently I have been writing a whole lot about the Shakespearean play “Hamlet,” but not to fear the end of Hamlet has come. All the people are dead, and all that is left is poor Horatio to deal with good old Fortinbras. Now that I am finishing Hamlet I can move on to my next topic which is going to be Frankenstein. I am excited for this new change in writing I was sort of getting over whelmed with all of the play type writing. Do not get me wrong I like Shakespearean plays and all that but to spend that long on them it got a little boring to me and some of the parts were harder for me to grasp at first. My first impressions of Frankenstein are that it is going to be a great book with a lot of killing, like Hamlet. I also think that we are going to bring a lot of the things that we had gotten out of hamlet back into this new book, though I have really been waiting to change to a new book and to finally stop talking about good old Hamlet.  Hamlet good bye I will come back to you in about five months.

Sunday, November 3, 2013

The Theroy

What I really think of Ophelia’s death in the play Hamlet.

I think that the Queen, Gertrude, had went with poor miss Ophelia to the lake, and while Ophelia was in the tree Gertrude had decided to break the branch she was sitting on or that she just started throwing rocks at Ophelia. The reasoning behind this theory of Gertrude being the killing factor of Ophelia is because the day before Gertrude had saw Ophelia. At this time Ophelia was not in her best state, due to her father’s recent death, and Gertrude was just fed up with what Ophelia was doing. So this gives the Queen a motive, but how did she get away with it? It is because she was the only one around that she had gotten away with it. Due to Ophelia’s state it seems like a plausible thing that she would so. Since Gertrude had been the only witness she decided what to tell everyone what had happened at the lake that afternoon. So Gertrude tried to cover her death up with a suicide. Even Ophelia’s brother, Laertes, had thought that his poor sister killed herself, but we know the truth of what had happened at the lake don’t we...

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Hamlet Deaths

Hamlet is an interesting play. And the first two people to die in the play are the two people that might as well be the most harmless characters in the play. These two characters are Ophelia and Polonius. Polonius had died by Hamlets hand. This was because he had hid in Gertrude’s room and Hamlet had been paranoid. Hamlet then proceeds to stab Polonius. Though it was while Polonius was hiding, and Hamlet had thought it was the king. Although Ophelia’s death had been worse than what had happened to her father Polonius. What the Queen, Gertrude, had said about her death was that she was sitting on a branch and had fell off of the branch into water and she had not tried to save herself by swimming away, or up for that matter. These two deaths were a tragedy, but Ophelia went crazy right before she had “killed herself”. Though these are not the only deaths that are going to happen within this play they are the deaths that set the tone for later on in the play. Ophelia’s death probably would not have happened if Polonius was not dead. She only went crazy because of her death. These deaths though tragic they are needed for the play.

Monday, October 28, 2013

Blogging

This year for English class we have to write a blog. At first I was very unexcited about this project but now later through the year I am happy that I get to do this. I just thought about how I can write about anything I really want on this blog, well within the limits of the blog project itself. I can also get feedback from people all over the world. I have been thinking about what else I can write about on this blog though I already have another blog, The Hooded Figure, that is a continuation of my series “Jandar’s Tale”. Although I have only written one post on this blog I will be working more diligently to keep this blog updated. I also like having this blog because it makes me think more about my writing and how I fair with different writing styles. My two blogs have been fun to post on, and I like just to put out some random things on them most of the time. I actually wonder if anyone reads my blogs or just kind of skims them than goes on to another better written blog. Hmm I will never know.

College

I know that there are so many people out there that are going through the same things that I am going through. These things include: worrying about what you are going to do with the rest of their life or what is going to do with the rest of your life or where you are going to college. Over the weekend I had taken the ACT and I feel pretty good about my score, though when I get the score I will have no idea what I should do with them. I mean I know I send them to the college I want to go to, but I don’t know where I want to go to school. Before today I had a plan of what I was going to do, but as the days pass I get more and more worried if I can’t go through with it. I really want to become a doctor, but I don’t want to have to go through all the things they do within their job. Which is why I think I am going to get my doctorate in medicine, but work as a nurse. If you are reading this it may sound a little weird to you though I am just kind of writing about what is on my mind right now. Thank you for your time and have a good day.

Hamlet Act 3

In any tragedy play of Shakespeare’s in act three is always the first scene where someone will first die. In his play Hamlet he does not disappoint. In act three Polonius was the first to die. He was killed by Hamlet because Hamlet had thought that the person snooping behind the curtain was Claudius, the new king, but to his surprise it was not. Hamlet had only seconds before saw Claudius, and was contemplating killing him right there. The reason that Hamlet had not killed Claudius right then is because he was repenting for all of his previous sins that he committed and hamlet did not want to send him to heaven of to a good place. Though it was ironic how right after Hamlet left Claudius had redacted all of the things he had confessed. With this death Hamlet and his mother had grown closer because his mother knows what he is going to do and she has come to terms with it in a sense. Although this death has started what seems to be a very bad time for all of the people that are living in the castle, and if all those people who keep talking about hamlet to me are truthful everyone will die except Horatio.

Monday, October 21, 2013

Break

The break was a good time for me, I had gotten a bunch of stuff that I wanted to get done completed. With this break I used my time to get more organized for the remainder of the year. I had also gotten all of my assignments done, gotten ready for college in mind and organization I had spent some time contemplating what I was going to do with my life. I had also gotten ready for the act. With all of the things that are going on. I took one or two days to relax my brain and not think about anything just to have fun and be a “kid”. With all that is coming up in life it is important for me to be organized which is why I am glad that I had spent this time to achieve organization in my academic and home life.  I can now be more successful in both the upcoming quarter and years to come in my life. I liked that we had this little splurged break though I am glad to be back in school. I am now ready for what is to come as well and even though it may be sad I can face and overcome this to go to college.

Sunday, October 6, 2013

Hamlet Act 1 Scene 2 Analysis

In his play “Hamlet”, William Shakespeare had implied that although distress and despair can come in many forms, it can ultimately lead to suicide or hardships throughout the rest of one’s life. This theme is the most prevalent through the speech that Hamlet gives in Act 1 Scene 3. In this scene Hamlet describes things that he finds to be troublesome and disgraceful towards the king. These things include how quickly his uncle and mother married, and how no one besides Hamlet is mourning over his father’s recent death. These two things are very well discussed throughout this soliloquy.           
To describe this he uses the emotion of Hamlet’s father’s death to help set the tone of Hamlet’s personality through the play. In this soliloquy Hamlet describes his feelings toward what his uncle and mother have done. To describe this he uses the phrases “But two months dead- nay, not so much, not two-“and “ Would have mourn’d longer- married with my uncle”. These two quotes show how emotional Hamlet is getting while his uncle and mother do these terrible deeds. These quotes also help to set the scene that no one besides Hamlet is still mourning due to the recent marriage within his family. These two points help out in describing Hamlet’s general feelings throughout the play. Finally they also help Hamlet build up his hatred for his uncle, but all together these terrible deeds force Hamlet to consider if death is the easiest way out of this horrific situation. With the thought of “self-slaughter” Hamlet must find a way to calm down. With all of the backstabbing from Hamlet’s family it might seem to be the easiest way for Hamlet to end these terrible deeds from happening, but he later finds that it was a good choice to not follow through with this plan.        

This theme of “distress and despair can come in many forms, but it can ultimately lead to suicide or hardships throughout the rest of a life” can describe Hamlets attitude through most of the play. 

Wednesday, October 2, 2013

My Identity

Identity is what people can perceive a general conception of a person, whether or not that conception has good intent or bad intent is dependent on the persons actions, and how the person speaks. Identity someone might see themselves differently than someone else perception of you.
To me my identity means a lot. This is because I do not want to be perceived in a certain way or to be perceived in a way that makes both me and my family look bad. Since I think my identity is all about how I act I try to do things that some people will not dare to do within a certain reason. One way that I have been perceived  is to have a lot of courage and be helpful to people who are in need. I know that some people have perceived me to have courage because whenever my friends are too scared to say, ask or do something, and if it is within reason I will do it. I have also found that people think this of me because of all the dancing I do in front of the whole school. The reason why I do dance in front of the whole school is because I think dancing is fun, and while I am dancing I go into my own world. Another way that I have been perceived as or least think that I have is being the “fun” person in the group or one of the most likable because I have such a wide range of interests. A reason that i think I can be perceived as this type of person is because of a trip I had taken with my church. At the beginning of this trip i had not really known anyone then at the end of the trip everyone was telling me that they had a really good time and they thought I had been really fun to hang out with for a week. I do not always see how i am this fun person, but I guess some people have influenced my identity.

These are the reasons that I think these are ways that I have been perceived. I also think that most of these perceptions have came from how someone has influenced me. I used to be a shy kid until I went to school for the first time. Then I had become more social and social throughout the years. With my dancing I used to not dance very often, but one school dance I had seen my brother dancing, so the image of us being twins and being similar had given me the boost to dance as well. I guess most of my Identity has come from my brother either me trying not to be like him in some senses or trying to be similar to him in others.

Monday, September 30, 2013

Omelet or Hamlet?

Hamlet is an interesting play; the way that the plot of the play works, and all of the double meanings with everything that hamlet says. This play is taught to all seniors yes, but it probably never really gets fully understand by these seniors; and also might who are just trying to finish high school with as good grades as they can. Then there are the people who do get the play and know exactly what they are going to do with their life; they also know how to reach their goals hastily. I am here to say I am not any of these two types of people. I do care where I go in life and how to get there. 
Though most of the time I am lost when reading this Shakespearean play “Hamlet”. In this play there are many characters that have many different “personalities” that show through the play. This play also makes me think harder than any math problem that I have seen in a long while. I am the type of person that does not like to dive into a text to find out a deeper meaning than what is on the surface. This is one of the reasons that this play is so hard for me to handle. The characters of this play also lead into the confusion of this play, but I think the hardest part for most of the seniors who read this play is trying to understand the language that Shakespeare uses since it has changed so much since then. That is what I think of this hamlet.

Thursday, September 26, 2013

Jandars tale??

               I have thought of many different outcomes over the week, but I still do not know the correct way to go about this. First I had been chased by the uh…. “things” then Shane had not come over for dinner, and to top it all off Barbra has stopped talking to me. How did it come to this; me sitting in the corner of the throne room weeping? For Ungo’s sake why am I weeping? I should just think back to when this day had been a normal, well normal for me anyways, day. It was just a regular ughsday; I had picked up my club from the local bluntery, and I had needed to find my seedling before their school got out.
                “Mighty fine day to get your club shaped back to form isn’t it Jandar?” Somi asked rapidly as I walked out of the bluntery with my club on my back.

                I have no clue what I began writing here, though I find it kind of interesting. I might continue this story further to see how this, (race undecided), Jandar will go from what he might call a normal day to a not so great day.  I am still trying to come up with how everything will fit together within this story. I do not know if I should add more details or just clarify later on where they are or what is happening in the world around them.  

                This is the unnamed story of Jandar. Come back Saturday for an update on the story, to maybe find out who this Jandar is or Whatever a seedling is.

Sunday, September 22, 2013

Shakespeare

Shakespeare was an amazing playwright, and poet. Even Though he was alive during a period of very advanced technology he had written things that are still used today. An example of this is Hamlet. This play is an iconic play of both the renaissance era and the era in which we live in today. It is also used to teach seniors in every high school. Other plays of Shakespeare such as Julius Caesar and Romeo and Juliet are also widely renowned and used to teach English in the school system. Though Shakespeare did not only write plays most of his poems hold the same if not more renown throughout the English community. These poems include the unique type of poem that Shakespeare was famous for which was the Elizabethan or Shakespearean sonnet. These sonnets are a tough type of poem to right because the writer/author of the poem is confined to certain types of rules.One of Shakespeare’s most famous sonnets is titled “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day”. This was one of the sonnets that were not titled, but the people who had the poems just titled it the first line of the poem; this is what is done to many untitled poems. Other than sonnets Shakespeare had written many other poems. Shakespeare was also the person who had changed the English language from middle to modern English. His courage to make new words that he wanted to and mold the language is the reason that the language is what it is today.

Thursday, September 19, 2013

Sonnets

Sonnets, in my mind, are one of the most difficult types of poems to write. this is because you have to follow a specific set of rules when creating one. These rules are have a poem that is fourteen lines long, and follow a certain rhyme scheme. This rhyme scheme depends on the type of sonnet. If you are going to write a Shakespearean sonnet then you have to follow the iambic pentameter and the abab cdcd efef gg type rhyme scheme, though if you replicate another sonnet type such as a Petrarchan sonnet which has a rhyme scheme of abbaabba cddcece. Although these types of sonnet styles may be different, they were influenced by the culture of where they originate. Shakespearean in England, and the Petrarchan in Italy
A sonnet that I have read lately was a sonnet titled “Sonnet”. This sonnet is by Billy Collins. In this sonnet Collins takes all of the basics of the sonnet, and makes a sort of joke out of writing these sonnets. At first he mentions the fourteen line necessity then he goes off to say how the rhythm might go in some of the other sonnet types such as iambic pentameter. Collins also puts in a line about how Petrarch needs to put down his pen and go to bed. This line tells me without knowing too much about Petrarch that he needed to calm down on his poem writing because he was writing too much and go to bed. This is what I have seen in this poem, and here it is:

Sonnet
All we need is fourteen lines, well, thirteen now,
and after this one just a dozen
to launch a little ship on love's storm-tossed seas,
then only ten more left like rows of beans.
How easily it goes unless you get Elizabethan
and insist the iambic bongos must be played
and rhymes positioned at the ends of lines,
one for every station of the cross.
But hang on here while we make the turn
into the final six where all will be resolved,
where longing and heartache will find an end,
where Laura will tell Petrarch to put down his pen,
take off those crazy medieval tights,
blow out the lights, and come at last to bed.

Billy Collins (b. 1942)

Monday, September 16, 2013

How Far We've Come

                “What goes on four legs in the morning, on two legs at noon, and on three legs in the evening?” This was the question asked by the Sphinx directed toward the man of Greek mythology named Oedipus.   It may be an easy riddle to crack, but it describes the human life quite well. Most humans go through their early years of life not knowing what they are going to do or where they are going to go. Then there are others who know exactly what they are going to do for the rest of their lives and how they are going to get there. I am not one of those types of people. I have no clue where I am going in life, but that is the way I like it. I can live my life and everything will be played out. I hope I get a good job and make decent money, but that may not happen. Even if it does I will know it was because I made a bad choice. Now you may be reading this and think to yourself where is he going with this, and to that I would like to say look at the title. Then look how far you have come in your life I know it felt like it was just yesterday and I was walking into my first day of kindergarten now as a senior I feel that I have come a far way and accomplished a lot through those years. I also look forward to where my life will take me, and I encourage you the reader to do the same.

Thursday, September 12, 2013

Imagery

                In writing imagery is one of the most important parts of that piece of writing. This imagery can help the reader imagine the setting that the story is taking place in. Imagery can be all sorts of different things that inform the reader what is happening within what they are reading. Examples of different types of imagery are olfactory-smell- imagery or gustatory-taste- imagery, or auditory-sound- imagery. All of these different types of imagery give the reader a better understanding of what is happening within the story. Even if the book is minimalistic imagery is needed in the book. For example The Road by Cormac McCarthy; this book is set in the time period of the aftermath of a nuclear apocalypse, and is a minimalistic book, though it has great imagery to show how horrifying the world is.
                Imagery is also needed in smaller pieces of writing such as poetry. Even though a piece of poetry may be small they usually are jam full of imagery that helps the reader understand the poem more fully. Sometimes the imagery may be more difficult to pinpoint in these pieces of poetry, but that is why poetry takes more thought to read. It is also more non literal than normal prose. A poem that uses imagery to its advantage and paints a beautiful picture or pictures in your head is “To Autumn” by John Keats. This poem utilizes the use of imagery to its advantage, and has a beautiful seasonal scene.
Here is the poem:
Season of mists and mellow fruitfulness,
Close bosom-friend of the maturing sun;
Conspiring with him how to load and bless
With fruit the vines that round the thatch-eves run;
To bend with apples the moss’d cottage-trees,
And fill all fruit with ripeness to the core;
To swell the gourd, and plump the hazel shells
With a sweet kernel; to set budding more,
And still more, later flowers for the bees,
Until they think warm days will never cease,
For Summer has o’er-brimm’d their clammy cells.

Who hath not seen thee oft amid thy store?
Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;
Or on a half-reap’d furrow sound asleep,
Drows’d with the fume of poppies, while thy hook
Spares the next swath and all its twined flowers:
And sometimes like a gleaner thou dost keep
Steady thy laden head across a brook;
Or by a cyder-press, with patient look,
Thou watchest the last oozings hours by hours.

Where are the songs of Spring? Ay, where are they?
Think not of them, thou hast thy music too,—
While barred clouds bloom the soft-dying day,
And touch the stubble plains with rosy hue;
Then in a wailful choir the small gnats mourn
Among the river sallows, borne aloft
Or sinking as the light wind lives or dies;
And full-grown lambs loud bleat from hilly bourn;
Hedge-crickets sing; and now with treble soft
The red-breast whistles from a garden-croft;
And gathering swallows twitter in the skies.


John Keats (1795-1821)

Sunday, September 8, 2013

Scholarships

 Scholarships have been seen as “free money” to spend on things while you chill in college, but that is not what scholarships should be they should be “free money” that helps you achieve the career that you are looking to do in your life. The money you gain from these scholarships are based on many qualities that a person may possess such as a person’s grade point average, if they play a sport that can transfer over into a sport that a college provides, or something as simple as writing a birthday card to a homeless child. These scholarships can help people gain money to get into college whether you want to be a doctor, NFL player or a social worker.
Scholarships can also help people gain jobs after they have left college. I know this sounds weird, but as someone gains scholarships they help build a portfolio for that person. With this portfolio a person can show how dedicated to getting into the field that they are looking to spend their life in. Scholarships such as the Presidential scholarship displays to an employer that the person who gained this scholarship is a hardworking and very intelligent person that is most likely going to help the business. Other scholarships such as the scholarship that a person gains if they write a birthday card for a homeless person might inform an employer that that person is a nice person that cares for others.

Although scholarships do not have to be all of these things, they do help a person that is looking to go to college, and make themselves a career.

Wednesday, September 4, 2013

Achievement Unlocked

                Achievements are being given for anything in the modern times, whether it is for participating in a soccer team or gaining level one hundred in smithing in Skyrim –an adventure role playing video game- achievements are rewarded. Though are achievements may be hard to get in some cases, there are other cases that achievements are just given out for just showing up for example earning a medal for participation on a soccer team.  The person how received this medal may have worked hard for this achievement, yes, but are medals and achievements given out too often?

 In earlier years of the United States and the world achievements were something that someone worked hard for, and they were given to very few people who earned them. This had inspired a competition that sparked people to try to work harder to be better than their peers. This competitive edge was one of the factors that helped build countries. Since so many achievements are given out many do not mean anything to some people, although there are still some achievements that people look up to or try hard to beat their peer to try to attain. With all of the achievements people tend to become less competitive. With some schools not having a valedictorian, and just having a top ten the people that are in the top ten would most likely not strive to gain a higher rank in their class because they will already receive the achievement of the top ten.

These are the reason why I believe that there are too many achievements and awards that people can attain that the value of attaining one of these achievements may be less desirable. I also believe that since there are so many awards given out the competitive edge of the world is lessening to a small minority of people.

Monday, September 2, 2013

The Ballad of Birmingham

                The Ballad of Birmingham is a symbol of the racial tensions in the southern United States during the 1960’s. The poem depicts a young girl asking her mother to attend a freedom march in Birmingham, Alabama. When her mother tells her that she may not attend, the little girl decides to attend a Sunday school service as of her mother’s wishes. At this Sunday school service a bomb had been planted and killed the girl. The irony of how the mother thought that going to church was more safe than going to a freedom march had implied how dangerous it was in the 1960’s for African Americans of the south, by implying how nowhere is safe, not even a church. With this connection to this time period the reader can understand the poem more fluently.  This poem had also been a way to get the message out with a different type of style than a newspaper or broadcast.

                My thoughts on this poem are that it is a nicely written poem, in the form of a folk ballad, and it has a great historical background, although I am no expert when it comes to poetry. I also think that it is a unique way of spreading the word across a large area. It reminds me of how the ancient Greeks used to tell their folk ballads and epic poems all over the country.  This poem also reminds me of how far the American culture has come with racial differences, yes there are still acts of racism or hate crimes being done, but there have been major advances towards equality.            

Now the poem:

“Mother dear, may I go downtown
Instead of out to play,
And march the streets of Birmingham
In a Freedom March today?”

“No, baby, no, you may not go,
For the dogs are fierce and wild,
And clubs and hoses, guns and jails
Aren’t good for a little child.”

“But, mother, I won’t be alone.
Other children will go with me,
And march the streets of Birmingham
To make our country free.”

“No, baby, no, you may not go,
For I fear those guns will fire.
But you may go to church instead
And sing in the children’s choir.”

She has combed and brushed her night-dark hair,
And bathed rose petal sweet,
And drawn white gloves on her small brown hands,
And white shoes on her feet.

The mother smiled to know her child
Was in the sacred place,
But that smile was the last smile
To come upon her face.

For when she heard the explosion,
Her eyes grew wet and wild.
She raced through the streets of Birmingham
Calling for her child.

She clawed through bits of glass and brick,
Then lifted out a shoe.
“O, here’s the shoe my baby wore,
But, baby, where are you?”


                Dudley Randall (1914-2000)